Annoying Mary Sue-ish heroine, boring plot (there are many better envisionings of this scenario out there!), too much angst & drama with no payoff, part 1 of 3 "installments" (oy just publish the whole thing at once), and definitely won't be reading the rest. I thought this reader's review summed up my thoughts exactly: http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/472250328
